1. Write using an active, confident tone and in present tense.
2. Write clear and concise sentences.
3. Write a clear introduction, body and conclusion.
4. Write academically without slang, contractions, clichés or other informal types of writing.
5. Write per the tone set by the audience and writing prompt.
6. Use the same tense throughout or make distinct tense changes.
7. Make sure paragraphs have a topic sentence, explanatory or supportive sentences and provide analysis.
8. Share yourself with confidence and precision.
9. The reader has no idea who you are. Write so it becomes evident to him or her.
10. Use correct grammar and spelling.

Be very intentional when constructing your personal statement. Begin working on it early so you have time to make several drafts. Be mindful of common errors and always keep your audience in mind. Other helpful links are listed below.

• California State University Sample Essays - provides sample essays for those applying to CSU programs.
• Essay Edge Tips and Samples - provides tips and samples to craft a personal statement that will stand out among your competition.
• Graduate School Personal Statement Examples - provides examples on how to show why you’re a good candidate for admission.
• Top Graduate School Essay Writing Mistakes You Must Avoid - learn about how to avoid grad school essay errors that can negatively impact your admission.
• Write an Essay That Will Knock Their Socks Off - learn how to show you are a desirable choice for admissions.
• Writing the Personal Statement - OWL - provides information about writing personal statements for admissions and academia.